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Post by Wolfdog on Sept 3, 2007 7:59:26 GMT -5
I got bored last night, so I ended up typing a story. I don't know what to call it yet, but I'm getting a little carried away with it. xD
[Insert name here] Rated: PG13 A bit graphic; but there isn't much swearing... Yet. :3 I got the main character's name from the story I'm reading. I couldn't think of any other name to call him. D8
No one knows why he is so dark; so mysterious. They say he was born in the fires of hell, raised by the devil himself. Rumor has it that he is possessed by something far worse than anything any wolf, alive or dead could ever have imagined. When his demon is called forth, destruction on an unimaginable scale shall be created, and the chance of the wolves’ survival is extremely slim. No prophecies, proverbs, stories, or legends tell of a hero that is to save the race of wolves or why one particular wolf was chosen to be the host of this demonic creature; but one thing they are sure of. If this demon is to come, be born into the race of angels, then we have no choice but to let the host live until it can fend for itself. Then we shall exterminate it at all cost.
[/i].” He said, Dieter seeming pleased by the answer. Slick turned his head to the crime scene, observing the wolves sniffing and running around, trying to figure out what had happened. “You go over to the crime scene; I’ll catch up with you in a bit.” The Privet said, watching Dieter pick up his stick and run off. ‘I have to tell Lord Yamaha.’ Slick thought, getting up and dashing up toward the path. He skid to a stop at the Clearing, and gazed up at the rock. “Lord Yamaha! I have some news!” He said, desperately hoping that their leader would answer. The seconds seemed to go by like moons to him, his body beginning to quiver. “What do you bring, Slick?” Came the wise voice of Yamaha. “I was talking with Dieter, and he told me that he was the killer.” Slick said, panting. Yamaha stepped out from beside the rock, a confused look playing on his face. “And do you truly believe what the pup is stating?” He asked, tilting his head. The Privet stopped, turning over his leader’s words in his mind. He was right; Dieter was just a pup. There was no way possible that Dieter could have killed Lady Myst. “Unless,” Slick said, his gaze hallow, “Dieter is the Cionaodh.” Yamaha froze at the soldier’s words. “You know by heart that it is forbidden to speak of that!” He thundered, the wind picking up speed. Slick cowered close to the ground, digging his claws into the earth to keep from blowing away. “I’m terribly sorry, my Lord!” Slick pleaded. “I won’t ever say or think of it!” The wind died down, and Yamaha’s stern gaze softened. He sighed, his eyes holding a hint of sadness. “If we come to the conclusion that Dieter is in fact the Cionaodh, then we will take necessary precautions.” He said, his voice grave. His next words struck Slick hard. “Then we will have to exterminate him.” The Privet turned his head to the ground, harks turning back. “I thank you for your news, Privet.” Yamaha said, his voice an octave lighter. Slick bowed his respect, then turned and ran off towards the crime scene.[/ul] I love to find pictures for characters in the stories I write, so here's the characters so far: [/size]
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Post by .:Uchiha Itachi:. on Sept 3, 2007 9:51:50 GMT -5
-big eyes- It's pretty good so far! I usually don't write animal stories, my area is human....
-nods- I think I sent you some of my work once..In a pm...Didn't I?
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Post by Wolfdog on Sept 3, 2007 15:44:05 GMT -5
Yeah; and it was A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!! =^^=
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Post by .:Uchiha Itachi:. on Sept 5, 2007 20:06:07 GMT -5
Lol. Thanks. :3
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Post by Wolfdog on Sept 8, 2007 17:09:39 GMT -5
Here's more to it.
[/i] Ryato snorted. “Hey, kid; there’s no way you could’ve done that, so don’t be saying that.” Dieter narrowed his eyes at the Sergeant. There was no way he would let some white wolf boss him around. The pup’s lips curled back into a snarl, needle-like fangs bared. “Don’t you ever tell me to keep quiet!” He threatened, fur bristling. Ryato chuckled at the pup’s attempted fury. “Kid, do you really think you can tell me what to do? I’m a higher rank; you can get the penalty for that.” Dieter didn’t seem to listen. His fierce golden eyes had maroon seeping into the iris, his growl deepening. “I don’t care what rank you are!” Dieter snarled eyes boring into Ryato’s gaze. The Sergeant’s cold gaze tore back at the pup, disbelieving the fact that Dieter had told him that he was the killer. Suddenly, without warning, Dieter struck; at an incredible speed. Ryato had absolutely no time to react before he was pinned to the ground, his windpipe being savagely torn at. Dieter drove his claws into Ryato’s neck, tearing out the flesh. Blood spurted from the Sergeant’s neck and mouth, his eyes widened in horror. He barley managed to speak; let alone breathe. Gathering all his strength, he cried out, “Help!” In a weak, raspy voice. Several soldiers ran over, desperately trying to save their commander. They bit onto Dieter’s scruff, pulling him. The pup wouldn’t let go; only adding more agony to the helpless Ryato. Dieter narrowed his eyes, eventually closing them. He had decided not to let go; only until the soldiers could get him off. Forty-seven agonizing minutes crept by, and a crowd of bystanders gathered. Shrieks and screams of terror sounded throughout the crowd, when finally the soldiers managed to pull the pup off, throwing him against a jagged rock. Ryato gagged, blood pouring from his mouth and neck. The soldiers took either side of the white and red wolf, helping him to the Shaman. Many other soldiers surrounded Dieter, who was staggering to get up. His bloodstained fangs were still bared, the crimson liquid having splattered his face. Maroon orbs glared coldly at the wolves surrounding him, and he savagely bellowed; equivalent to that of a matured male lion. One by one, the wolves circling him fell, their eyes rolled to the back of their heads. Many more screams sounded, and Dieter thundered again. The wolves whipped around, and rocketed off to their dens. Within seconds the grass was clear, and a white blur darted through the forest. The pup didn’t even mind to turn and kill whoever it was; only to stay focused. Slowly, his maroon eyes turned into their regular fierce gold. With a swift movement, he disappeared into the darkness.[/ul] More to come! [/size]
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Post by Sasuke Uchiha. on Sept 8, 2007 18:36:03 GMT -5
Whoa. That rocks. Kinda reminds me of Wolf's Rain. Not the plot or anything just like the wolf idea. And thats were I got my name Blue from Wolf's rain
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